Very nice style, neat and crisp. I also really like the very nice job you did for the throat, very realistic. Overall you did a very nice job. Just as a personal opinion I would of preferred it to be a little longer, also maybe a little more dialogue, but saying that the art style is beautiful, it is also very creative as well, which is very nice to see, and it feels like there is a story that could develop behind this. I don't really have any qualms about your work. Very good job.
I will give it overall a 4/5